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Kiki ([personal profile] kikibug13) wrote in [personal profile] kittydesade 2013-05-13 02:11 pm (UTC)

Облако ползёт по солнцу -> Облака (plural) and then the verb should be in past tense, not present.
The rest of the sentence looks... good, to me.

Были к его дом и просматривали наш университета документы. -> в его доме, I believe. Stationary, AT his house, prep case. Просматривали наши университетски документы.

So... not bad, once again! :)

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