Сними сердце на мёртвию птицу -> сердце мёртвую птицу (fem. and you don't need the preposition with acc.)
и проклоти залпом -> I think you have typos here.
и с каждые утра -> и каждoе утрo - sing. neutral, no need of prep. - you have the stupid cases for that...
когда вставашь -> вставаeшь, I think
ты найтишь один золота монета -> coordinate! what gender is the noun? The number should be the same, and the adjective... should be adjective and also coordinate.
But overall, not bad! (Mistakes are GOOD. It means you're thinking, rather than automatically copying things out of somewhere.)
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Сними сердце на мёртвию птицу -> сердце мёртвую птицу (fem. and you don't need the preposition with acc.)
и проклоти залпом -> I think you have typos here.
и с каждые утра -> и каждoе утрo - sing. neutral, no need of prep. - you have the stupid cases for that...
когда вставашь -> вставаeшь, I think
ты найтишь один золота монета -> coordinate! what gender is the noun? The number should be the same, and the adjective... should be adjective and also coordinate.
But overall, not bad! (Mistakes are GOOD. It means you're thinking, rather than automatically copying things out of somewhere.)